This poem reflects a feeling that is very familiar to me. You did a great job of relating the emotion, or lack of it

amazing work 5>>>>>>>>>

Wow, well done on a brilliant poem! I found that I really connected and was attached to each word! great visuals and descriptions! keep up the good work!

Very Nice!

This poem is amazing!
I love it!
Amazing wording!
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I liked how you described everything. I could see everything as I was reading it. You are a really good writer (much better than I am! lol). I loved it. 5/5

=D
~Kail

Your words are coming from the heart, i could see it from the start =) i feel your strong poems from start to end. keep it up 5/5
eddy

Wow, such a powerful poem
fav. part:Nothing can undo or reach this unbelievable disaster
To be forever stuck in numbness as the master

i really loved this
excellant
5/5

A very powerful piece of poetry that amazed me with descriptive and very spellbinding words.
well chosen words, i'm thinking and a nice rhyme and flow was very good.

In this phase an ounce of pain cannot exist
The mind and soul is smothered in mist
Eyes cannot see but there is no fear
For emotions are incapable of drawing near.
^^ ^^ ^^ ^^
a wonderful stanza that got to me more then the rest.

an amazing write and magnificent read!

5/5

Keep Writing, hun
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

Wow..
like your poem! good choice..
well keep up the good work!

At first i didnt totally understand the title. but that was such an amazing poem! the title made PERFECT sense and it was so....desperate sounding. and forlorn. it was amazing. i give it a 5!

Wow very powerful, also very skillfully written.5/5

A lot of emotion can be seen in this. It is very well-written and descriptive.
5/5

Wow i really really like this one, great job

-Rafael

Very dark but nicely done

Reflects the emotions a lot of us have to go through almost everyday! awesome!

Nice piece. Great imagery, and word choice. I like how you really come to the description on how numbness can actually be. I think it was a great perspective, and was quite thought provoking. Very nice work.

The feeling of being numb is an odd one, but many people go through it when they've been hurt too much, it's like they numb themselves to the pain. I've been through phases of being numb, but nothing to intense.

I thought some of the rhymes sounded a litte forced and the flow was a little rocky, but nothing too drastic. I think the flow could be helped if you added some punctuation though. Just to help the reader know when to pause.

I think you captured the feeling of being numb pretty well though. I could definitely feel it as I read through, remembering those moments when I was numb myself.

No one really writes about being numb. Most write about very strong emotions, so I think this was unique. :]

No where near passionate life or the fateful dead
`` "No where" should be "Nowhere". :]

Commanded to do nothing and not live in any way
`` "any way" should be "anyway".

Overall, I liked it. x]

Keep writing!

.||CAYYCE||.

This is an excellent write, I think I have felt this numbness at times and you are so right it is far worse than any emotional response to pain! very well done!