This isn't like anything else that you've written. This is dark, Kail. I know who this was written for and I'm sorry that they will never know that those deep words were meant for them.

Very heart felt.....

This poem is very good. It flows well and I can tell it comes from the heart. Keep it up.

Wow, this was extremely good. It was very well expressed and well rhymed. It was one of those poems that just flowed so neatly and never, not once..did I have to stop in the poem. It flowed nicely. :] Nice job. 5/5.

Well written... one could feel the anguish... the sadness behind those lines...

"Tearing up my arms with scratches from my nails
Flipping the happy coin, it always lands on tails.
I'm not content in this lifetime, I hate it more each day
As I wipe away my tears, I know why it's this way. "

^^ i loved the ending here...

good write.. keep writing..

This is a good write. I liked the flow of this poem. Nice work.

Wow! the flow was great and going threw everything u have, i could understand u hating life more each day,very nice write,very deep and emotional! 5/5 always
Kate~LSB23

A very well writen poem, i can tell it is heartfelt and whoever doesnt understand your love for them now is a fool who just missed out, please go comment my poem clock hits 12

It wasnt bad but it wasnt absolutely terrific [[sorry xP]]

the meaning was wonderful, topic was awesome but it could have flowed a little bit better. anyhow good job! =)

This rhyme reflects a break in the rhythm of your heart dew to a longing yet, your words flow perfectly well
Great poem!

This was an amazing poem that made me cry. Sometime life is just so unfair.
You did a great job.

I thought the flow was good. I didn't have any awkward pauses. This subject has been written about so many times, but I can tell you were venting, so it was good to get it off your chest. I think you should check your punctuation though. I noticed you lefted out some periods and stuff.

If you wanted to make it a better poem, I would suggest adding more colorful words, maybe use some metaphores or similes. Engage the reader, make them feel like they're a part of what's happening.

Overall, it was a nice poem.

Keep writing!
Cayce