I liked your poem. Very emotional and touchy. It also has a good flow... Well written.

Another great poem! I like the "if sometimes" repeating style. once again great pacing, great choice of words, and an awesome poem

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D. Johnson.

This is a brilliant poem, awesome theme and a very meaningful message, loved it all the way

all the best and take care

What a wonderful message you have penned in this poem.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

What if? what if poetry did not exsist?
What if we had no soul?
Would we still do the stuff that we do, or keep on our lives like we know nothing.
Great poem, you my friend have talent.

Very hott poem... i loved it