I've Seen That Look

by HidinVictim   Jun 9, 2008


I've seen that look before
Last time
It left me on the floor
With bloody wrist
And a heart amiss

Last time that look
Said it was sorry
But there was someone else
Try to understand
And it's love still stands.

I didn't say much
And it asked if I was OK
I lied though my teeth
In actuality I couldn't breath

I said I was fine,
But all I could think
Was that look lied
Cause it said
One day it would be mine
Said one day I'd have my time

Well he got the best of me
And left me with the worst
I've grow up since then.

And from that look
My heart did mend
Found myself a new friend
4 good months
And I fell in love

And now I wonder
If that's the case
Saw old look,
With a brand new face

I'm praying to a God
In which I don't believe
That this is all imaginary

I've seen that look before
Last time
It left me on the floor
With bloody wrist
And a heart amiss

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  • 15 years ago

    by HvN

    Great poem! very well written!

  • 15 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    This is a good poem.The flow was a little sloppy and I thiunk it would be better if you organized it more.5/5 though

    ---amber---

  • 15 years ago

    by Michelle18

    I really like this poem... but your vocabulary seemed a bit.. safe.. try using more powerful words.. but other than that .. i like the concept.. its really good.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Blissful

    Wow I could truly feel the emotions you expressed her with your words. I could tell it came straight from you heart which made it that much more interesting to read well done. *5/5*

  • 15 years ago

    by sweet escape

    Once again this is a very good poem and it has a lot of depth and emotion but the constant varriation in the lenght of the stanza thows me off.
    other thank that it is a great poem.
    4/5

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