by LIGURE          Jun 10, 2008
    
        category :
            Dark, fantasy /
            dark, horror
            
    
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            I'll cut my wrist  | 
by Rinji
| I think it was pretty good, but in the last two stanzas you seem to lose your rhyme scheme of "abcb" so it kinda threw me off and lost my attention a bit. Anywayzzz..... I thought it was good XD |