You just judged me in this poem.
I understand exactly what its like to
have people make you feel so invisible and act as if
you don't exist.
Your poems are so powerful and have got such emotive and strong meanings.
i loved your use of words,
they were so honest and true.
they went straight to my heart,
good job!!
Shell, x

I can feel your pain. especially when people dont seem to realize your hurting so much inside.
this poem is beautiful.
you did a wonderful job.

I can relate to this poem more than I'd like to admit. All the questions at the beginning really made an impact and set the emotional tone.

-----> They're afraid to see her
because then they'd have to admit
she's not okay
`` I think this was a very strong ending. It stuck with me after I read it. I guess because i could relate to it so much.

Check your punctuation and capitalization, though. It'll make the poem a lot more enjoyable to read. x]

Keep writing!
Cayce

Wow, what a wonderful poem, it was really touching.People only see what they want to see and they don't want to tire them selves in helping people who are in pain.
I really can feel you.
nice poem5\5.

So many people can relate i hate when people do that...hang in there babe
5/5

So powerful and true.
I can relate, and I love this poem.
Great flow, and simply amazing to read.
Keep writing.