I should have known

by Laura Allen   Jun 13, 2008


A friendship broken by three little word
Why did i think we could ever be anything more?
I wish I could turn back time to the day I said I love you
Cause before those words you were my best friend
But I cant do that
I cant go back and neither can you
So I guess Ill say goodbye right now
Cause this friendship couldnt survive
Those three little words
Do I wish you had never uttered them?
Hell no
Cause when I think about it
You meant more to me then
I loved hearing those three little words
I was just foolish enough to think you really meant them
Cause when I said them I meant every word
I still miss you and I probably always will
But she has your heart
I just wish Id known that then
Before I gave you the power to break mine

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  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Some structure and some flow problems, they are obvious, if we are to judge only on that then this poem would fail...by most 'poets' standards.

    I enjoyed this poem because I'm able to look past and see what was truly there. Poetry, it was a wonderful message, one that is filled with emotion and deeply thought out message.

    I think that his poem is very well done. I enjoyed how much emotion was put into it, I enjoyed the work that you thought about.

    I actually read one of your quotes and had to read a poem of yours. It's really quite good, I'm very glad I did now.

    5/5

    Yours Sincerely,
    Shaun Aka Dark Savior.

  • 15 years ago

    by Maurice

    This is very good.

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