The subject of poem is good. I am lover of nature... I hate all the people who treat mother Earth bad. I hate the Iron monsters. Human destroying the nature...and finally...the nature will destroy us. What is left then?
This was a really great nature poem. such beautiful colors stuck in my mind at the beginning and they all vanished at the end. it truly shows what we're doing to this earth. i loved it, and i also thought the form was great.
Excellent work. Wow. I thought the style you used was very interesting.. going in to read the poem I was thinking Minute Poetry was actually.. you write what you can in one minute with no revising and such .. this was quite interesting and I would think probably very difficult to do.. :) However, you did a excellent job staying with the rhyme scheme and keeping the right syllables in each line. This poem has sooooo sooooo much imagery it's just really amazing. Quite the impressive poem. Great work. 5/5.
I have read your peoms,they are GREATTT...i am impressed,I will be greatly honoured,if you comment on my poems,atleast mark corrections,or give some suggestions,please,your words will be of great importance to me,
I'm quite a big fan of nature poetry. I think it's beautiful when people are inspired for their artwork by the very world we live in. I've never written in this form of poetry before, but it definitely looks difficult, so I congratulate you on writing this so well.
Wow this was really great. I loved how it flows to a beat, almost slow then fast. I love the visual details you use and the word choices to influence your subject. I loved the point you were trying to make and you made it loud and clear. Very well done, I think.
This poem is unique and nicely written. Enjoyed every minute reading it. The rhymes are perfectly matched to the subject and the flow is amazing. The imagary phrases are strong and bring a destructive messege: We destroy nature. Good job 5/5