Comments : Nature Weeping (Minute Poetry)

  • 11 years ago

    by Goodbye

    The subject of poem is good. I am lover of nature... I hate all the people who treat mother Earth bad. I hate the Iron monsters. Human destroying the nature...and finally...the nature will destroy us. What is left then?

    Great poem. I enjoy it.

    Keep on writing. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Prasad B

    Lovely work yet again...

    keep it up..

    best wishz.. karan

  • 11 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Yes man destroys nature, and i love nature. The style you used was great but it seemed to have contained you and i didnt get too much out of it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lori

    Blooming blanket of greenish hue
    Soothing breeze blew
    Lush forest realm
    Now overwhelmed

    ^^omg i LOVE your word choice in this line "Blooming blanket of greenish hue." Excellent! I have nothing to criticize in this line. Love it

    Iron monsters demolishing
    Voices screaming
    Trampled flora
    Fading fauna

    ^^Oh I love this line too! Once again...word choice...AMAZING!

    Deserts replacing vanished green
    Distubed serene
    Man destroying
    Nature weeping

    ^^This short line says so much about what is going on in this world. I love this piece because it shows how talented you are and it can def change a persons perspective!Excellet job! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by forevertobeart

    This was a really great nature poem. such beautiful colors stuck in my mind at the beginning and they all vanished at the end. it truly shows what we're doing to this earth. i loved it, and i also thought the form was great.

  • 11 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Excellent work. Wow. I thought the style you used was very interesting.. going in to read the poem I was thinking Minute Poetry was actually.. you write what you can in one minute with no revising and such .. this was quite interesting and I would think probably very difficult to do.. :) However, you did a excellent job staying with the rhyme scheme and keeping the right syllables in each line. This poem has sooooo sooooo much imagery it's just really amazing. Quite the impressive poem. Great work. 5/5.

  • 11 years ago

    by Taylor

    Ususally, I'm not real big into anything other than symple prose and verse, but this actually made sense, and had a flow that I could really follow. I like the simplicity of it. Well Done

  • 11 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Excellent job on this form!!! Good word choice and imagery.

  • 11 years ago

    by Muhammad Junaid

    Hi,
    I have read your peoms,they are GREATTT...i am impressed,I will be greatly honoured,if you comment on my poems,atleast mark corrections,or give some suggestions,please,your words will be of great importance to me,
    Thanks

  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Hey LR, I love this format! It looks rather difficult though. You have done well on the choice of words and I could not agree more on this message....
    Great job!

    Take care,

    Ingrid

  • 11 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I'm quite a big fan of nature poetry. I think it's beautiful when people are inspired for their artwork by the very world we live in. I've never written in this form of poetry before, but it definitely looks difficult, so I congratulate you on writing this so well.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lindsey

    Wow this was really great. I loved how it flows to a beat, almost slow then fast. I love the visual details you use and the word choices to influence your subject. I loved the point you were trying to make and you made it loud and clear. Very well done, I think.

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    RL
    You did a wonderful job on this poetry form. Great Imagery and word choices,
    ((hugs))
    Cindy

  • 11 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This poem is unique and nicely written. Enjoyed every minute reading it. The rhymes are perfectly matched to the subject and the flow is amazing. The imagary phrases are strong and bring a destructive messege: We destroy nature. Good job 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Sarah

    Though this poem is short and simple... still it is nice and great 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Sourav

    Poem about nature is not only good but also encouraging! I liked your poem for it's thoughts and the form. Very well constructed lines. Wonderful imagery and description! Very well done!