I thought it was very funny, the especially the end and the part about the hash.

This poem was GREAT. Everything you said was felt from your heart. Everything you mentioned is needed by each other. I really loved this poem and it is on my favorite I especially loved where you said "Like people need church and a map needs to be searched" but really......... .the sun doesn't need to be hotter.

Nice i like it the end was my favorite part and am bored now just neede you to know:)p

I liked it a lot 5/5

Simple, yet very unique :).
I like it !. The rhyming scheme also works :D!

My day is going sucky at the moment your poem made me smile and laugh. thank you

Love this lol!!!

Funny and romantic good work

I love it its real good!!!

Very fun!

Ohmygina. You've gotta be Joshin' me. c; I love this poem. :p It's cute, funny, and I love it! It also just made my day. <3

Very funny...it made me giggle :)

I like the ending rhyme, pretty funny bout the stripper with no a** haha

I like the ending rhyme, pretty funny bout the stripper with no a** haha

Nyc cut..cute one..fallin fr t

This poems is a very good one keep up the good work (:

I love wat u did with this poem, different and fun. well done!!!!!

Three letters LOL

Lol so true

I like this