This poem delivered a strong message on fidelity
The straight to the point
The shortest distance between two points is a line
This defines that line that must not be crossed very well
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Excellent point youv'e made here, all people should feel this way when its deserved
Great job again =]

I agree with Michael; short, but strong and straight to the point. An important topic, and you sussed it out well. Only one thing: in the line:

"Your quite a cruel soul"
Your should be You're.

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Write on!
Smiles,
N*

Short and too the point yet pretty effective, gd job :)

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I like this, you express your feelings well in this poem. You wrote this so well, so nice work!

Wow! that same thing happend to one of my very best friends. and well he felt really bad! hope he dose to! 5/5

This describes most guys >.>

A very straight forward piece. I love the succinct intesity and the message you delivered. A mistake made that was that wrong should be thought over and thought over again, Think before you act doesn't go too well with most people. Nice job. =]