Really adorable!!
well done sis

i liked the choice of words too well done

Absolutely gorgeous! i loved it! 5/5 :)

Beautiful poem. :) I loved it. Very much. It's so expressive and stunningly written. The imagery was excellent--of course it would be. :)
Kudos!

Another wonderful job on this formed poetry.
Love Cindy

Beautifully written!

Wow.
It was veryy good.I am really impressed.I hope i could write such thing.You are really Creative,it seems you have very strong emotions.Really i dont have words to praise what i have read and juddged you from your writing.It is really verry good.
I am submitting my poems in this forrum and i need people like you to read them,give me suggestions and corrections,so that i can also improve my abilities.It will be very nice of you,if you please take out some time and read my few submitted poems.I would love to hear some possitive criticism from your side.
Love
Junaid

Interesting, but kind of lazy, lol jk. just messing with you. good poem.

Ingred, Somehow between the highly intelectual concepts of your writing and the depths of your heart from which your poetry flows so freely, I always seem to be left somewhere in between unable to create a comment befitting the beauty of your expressions in verse . 5/5 ---JIM

Very sweet, and unique! It flows so well, and I always learn something new whilst reading your poems. Beautiful write, 5/5

mandy :)

A Softly Beautiful and Wonderful Write, Great Job!!!