This was full of deep emotions, great rhyme, imagery, flow, literally.. everything a poem needs to be perfect. I think this was really good.. however it was in a more paragraph form, which I don't care much for! But, the content of the poem is all that matters. Great work. 5/5.
The rhyming was good. I loved how you used more expressive words rather then mad and sad. I liked the feeling of you describing it as cold rather then hot which we all think about when we think of hell. nice job indeed!
I sense an subliminal emotion to this well written poem saying eloquently after all is said and done you are going to be the lonely one. The poem seems two have two levels personifying solitude. It reflects the kind of depth I really enjoy reading