Comments : Forsaken

  • 11 years ago

    by Undicicive Addiction

    Its cool i like it

  • 11 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was full of deep emotions, great rhyme, imagery, flow, literally.. everything a poem needs to be perfect. I think this was really good.. however it was in a more paragraph form, which I don't care much for! But, the content of the poem is all that matters. Great work. 5/5.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kaila

    Nice job:)
    The rhyming was good. I loved how you used more expressive words rather then mad and sad. I liked the feeling of you describing it as cold rather then hot which we all think about when we think of hell. nice job indeed!

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I sense an subliminal emotion to this well written poem saying eloquently after all is said and done you are going to be the lonely one. The poem seems two have two levels personifying solitude. It reflects the kind of depth I really enjoy reading

    Well done 5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

  • 11 years ago

    by Sora Lynn

    I love the way you write yer poems, very expressive and great details! keep it all up! =]

  • 11 years ago

    by adroit

    Deep, dark, sad poem. No. Not sad. Kind of angry. Nice job. Great flow. Honest luck.


  • 10 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A very deep write... chilling too! A good descriptive piece that just captivates/chills the reader!!

    Very well done!