Remember
by Perla Jun 17, 2008
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Remember when we were young, and use to flirt all day long. When I used to show you how much I loved you, by pinching you when you were near. When the closest we got to holding hands was playing mercy, and never let go. When on valentines day I would spend hours choosing the perfect card for you; which said "you make me feel all bubbly inside!" I guess I forgot how much I loved you. Until I saw you with that girl and then, I remembered how much I loved you. But I'm guessing you forgot too! |
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17 years ago
I think you poem was
gorgeous and really sweet
and expressive, especially for
your first poem.
It should never matter what others think,
as long as you say whats on your heart
and are happy with what
you have written
then thats all that counts.
I really thought this poem was
so sweet and just absolutely gorgeous.
It made me think of my boyfriend
who I love soooo much!!
Well done hun,
keep up the good work and hope to see
more from you soon, k :)
***take care*** -
17 years ago
by Perla
Thanks for saying what u think this is the first poem I have ever wrote
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17 years ago
by Lovely
Its wasnt excellend and it wasnt bad. It was fair. I liked the way you wrote it in a paragraph instead of stanzas, that was great but it was fair . 3
