This was touching to me, i loved reading every word. keep up the wonderful poems!

I thought this was a well written poem
I could relate to each line and verse,
but the ending makes it a little hard for me to comment.
Life is just too precious to give up on
A sad poem but well worth a 5/5

Omg I love it beutiful n am bad typer

That was really good 5/5

Wow! That was amazing! Absolutley beautiful and I loved the comparisons! Oh, and thank you for your comment on my poem! It means a lot! :) Keep up the great work!
-Peace Always-
5/5 all the way!

This was truly a excellent work. "Hush, dawn is coming; whispers star's sweet sigh." The writing is clear and fluid, not clumpy like most of the poetry I come in contact with. Great job.