This poem is very beautiful!
i loved it.
it was different and different is good.
job well done, keep up the good work!!

Very nice poem. Thanks for the good read.

So far from the poems i read your poem was different from them all.

but i really liked it, i sort of got a picture in my head about this happening

Of all of yours this is my favorite, this is the one I have had to read more than once and really enjoyed it, keep the poems coming.