Rachel
What a breathtaking beautiful poem.

From my room with a view I see
Sapphire waves of coming tide
Wispy clouds floating by
As day will soon subside

I can see the blue waves as the day begins to turn to night.

Grains of sand return
To an ocean vast
As the sun sinks east
Shadows now are cast

The imagery and word choices are wonderful.

Gazing out to the horizon
Anticipating night
Starry eyes awaiting
Moon to cast her light

The picture you have painted with your words is awesome.

Being one with nature
Soothing me with care
Never will she leave me
For mother's always there

I love the ending, The peacefulness of natures beauty. What a wonderful piece you penned for the contest.
Love Cindy

Rachel,
As always you have not failed your readers. You have penned an exquisite piece here. You know how much I adore nature poems and you have captured the essence of it's beauty in this poem. The sunset, the rise and fall of the oceans tide, Absolutely amazing!
The imagery was astounding. I could picture myself on a beachside bungalow watching this take place with the breeze of the ocean blowing the curtains. Awesome stuff here.

Amazing write...what a beautiful picture you have painted before us... one feels like simply watching the beauty of nature unfold before us...

"Being one with nature
Soothing me with care
Never will she leave me
For mother's always ther"

^^ wow.. this is simply beautiful...my favorite stanza..

Loved it... :)

Being one with nature
Soothing me with care
Never will she leave me
For mother's always there

What a great end of a lovely poem, awesome poem indeed with a great imagination. Sapphire waves.....wow these lines took me to a beautiful place. This is the best part of poetry...i could travel to some unique beautiful places and thats also for FREE.. :)

great write dear

all the best and take care

Beautiful imagery and flawless flow

Good luck in the contest

Wow, what a vivid poem. All of the stanzas had a fantastic effect of just painting the perfect picture in my mind.

Grains of sand return
To an ocean vast
As the sun sinks east
Shadows now are cast

^^
The imagery depicted here is just breathtaking and allows for the reader to easily picture it in their mind.
This was a wonderful piece.

Being one with nature
Soothing me with care
Never will she leave me
For mother's always there

Last stanza is fantastic. I always like poems about nature. It's very meaningful and touchy. Wonderful write. :)

I love nature poems, but it's not often I find one I actually enjoy. This one on the other hand was amazing, such a deep meaning and the words were very powerful. Mother nature will always be there...excellent job 5/5

"From my room with a view I see
Sapphire waves of coming tide
Wispy clouds floating by
As day will soon subside"
`I loved how you started it out like you were actually looking out a window, because it puts the reader in your exact position and it makes me picture this so perfectly. This description was amazing. I couldn't have worded it better than you did. The words that you used to describe this view was amazing. So vivid!

Overall, such a beautiful write. One that you could picture so vividly, and when you look at the picture it's exactly what I imagined in my mind. Wonderfully written. This poem was amazing, you definatly have your way with words! 5/5

I find my poems lack description
which is why i particually admire this one

it really painted a picture with words
made me feel relaxed

thankyou xx

Rachel,

Poetry is great and springs up from the most unlikely places, imagery for instance. A picture paints a thousand words, but best of all when they are crafted such as yours here.

I love the sapphire reference and the passage of time, form sunset to moon rise, possibly a reference to the enduring love given freely by a mother.

Great piece :)

Michael

Resplendent Write, Wonderful Rachel!!!