As always you have not failed your readers. You have penned an exquisite piece here. You know how much I adore nature poems and you have captured the essence of it's beauty in this poem. The sunset, the rise and fall of the oceans tide, Absolutely amazing!
The imagery was astounding. I could picture myself on a beachside bungalow watching this take place with the breeze of the ocean blowing the curtains. Awesome stuff here.
Being one with nature
Soothing me with care
Never will she leave me
For mother's always there
What a great end of a lovely poem, awesome poem indeed with a great imagination. Sapphire waves.....wow these lines took me to a beautiful place. This is the best part of poetry...i could travel to some unique beautiful places and thats also for FREE.. :)
I love nature poems, but it's not often I find one I actually enjoy. This one on the other hand was amazing, such a deep meaning and the words were very powerful. Mother nature will always be there...excellent job 5/5
"From my room with a view I see
Sapphire waves of coming tide
Wispy clouds floating by
As day will soon subside"
`I loved how you started it out like you were actually looking out a window, because it puts the reader in your exact position and it makes me picture this so perfectly. This description was amazing. I couldn't have worded it better than you did. The words that you used to describe this view was amazing. So vivid!
Overall, such a beautiful write. One that you could picture so vividly, and when you look at the picture it's exactly what I imagined in my mind. Wonderfully written. This poem was amazing, you definatly have your way with words! 5/5