Wow. This was really good actually. I'm proud of you for changing! That was amazing to hear, that you went from sad to happier and having a better life and that you are now confident and know that nobody will ever be perfect, not even yourself. Nice work! I love it! 5/5

To write this poem in only a couple of minutes...i'd say it's perfect....sweet and straight to the point...i love it

A much better write then the first one I read.
There are still problems with the rhymes( stanza two is best) and with the rhythm(third stanza last line) but on a whole much better.

I enjoyed reading this poem. I'm glad you've been able to become a more stronger ,positive you. More of us need the stretnths that you harbor. I looked,but found virtually nothing wrong with this poem. Great job.<3

5/5

Very done, I was very pleased to read this poem. WELL DONE.

I looooove what this poem is about. It sends the right message to everyone. No one is perfect so just love yourself despite the flaws. Plus, I think it's the flaws that make us beautiful. x]

In the first stanza the flow was amazing, but I thought the word choice was a little simple, but hey if you like the simple words stick with it. :]

----------> Frowns and more frowns.
`` Ahhh, okay. I don't like the "and more forwns". You used the same word in one line, and it just bugs me. >< Maybe keep the second frown so it doesn't mess up the rhyme, but change the first one. Maybe it could be "Scowls and frowns"? It's up to you. :]

Once again, I love this message so much. I remember when I came to the realization that I needed to love myself. It really changed my attitude toward things.

This was wonderful! Great job! x]

Keep writing!
Cayce

Not good? you're joking, this is incredible! :]

I thought it was ok...
I loved the message that you were trying to send out; everyone needs to chnage for the better, so good job.