Days drawn closed..

by Ash   Jun 26, 2008


Days drawn closed to heartless times,
When love was declared before you every time.
And yet there is no love to share anymore,
For that bridge in space has been shut by this door.

A link in time to break what was real,
I thought that I'd really tell you how I feel.
And suddenly your so-called care would draw me astray,
And I'd be caught reliving the words of that day.

I always fell for what you'd said,
For your charm would be conveyed upon words to tread.
Days seemed so happy when your silence was never near,
Yet all that flutters in my heart is how I cared for you dear.

Each time the silence fills the air,
It beckons doubt wherein to ensnare.
I'd silently wonder if this is a game you always play,
Or is it just in my mind that leaves me lost today.

It's a love that cannot die with time,
And each day that goes by I cannot hold you to be mine.
For the distance between us shows me the real truth.
I cannot deny the fact that this is one's separate route.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    I suck at english but as far as i understood it was good . . I got a little bit of it . Lol . I ll give you 5 . . .

  • 15 years ago

    by Ezzey

    Each time the silence fills the air,
    It beckons doubt wherein to ensnare.
    I'd silently wonder if this is a game you always play,
    Or is it just in my mind that leaves me lost today.

    God bless you ash for this wonderful poem . we truly wish that your well-described sadness is not something real you suffer from,yet we do enjoy the bleeding of your feelings.:D

  • 15 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    I always enjoy reading your poem

    great work

  • 15 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Good one again..

    Keep it up..

    Best wishz...

    Karan

  • 15 years ago

    by Extinct Angel

    A wonderful lost love poem i rate it 1million/5 you are way better than me on love poems I love the last 2 lines great way to write the truth