I enjoyed the new set of words you used. It was pretty good. Too me it felt too simple. I don't know I guess I just wanted something more complex. It wasn't a bad poem, don't get me wrong you did exactly what you probably wanted to do, tell a little simple thing of what love is, what happens, and describe what it is with unique words. You did well on that. There just something that seems missing to me. Then again I am the poetry Hitler so my opinion isn't much. Lol. Four out of five.

Beautiful poem.. and every part is so true.. love is the best feeling in the world while it lasts.. and once i and you or anyone for that matter .. find love it will be something like we've never experienced and something we wont want to give up.

your peom touched me because it was so genuine.

the flow was good and the only thing i suggest is maybe a stronger ending. it didnt end quite like i had hoped.

but still its very good and deserves a 5/5

I agree! Love is real and amazing :]]

I do think that this was a bit simple and you could have taken it to another level because I know you have the potential. I would have liked it to have been longer because I felt like you had more to say and it ended to quickly. Other than that I truly adored this piece and I am proud of your different words used. Well done *5/5*

I'd have to agree as well...love can be wonderful, although you have a more positive outlook on it than me. It was a smooth read, although I would as well have liked it to be longer. I think you should add some more of the negative ideas of love, but just make it out that love is worth it in the end despite that. Other than that I liked it and think you are a fantastic writer. :)

I liked this one also. There should be more people that understand love comes in all forms.

'Love can be articulate,
or felt in numerous ways.
There's always a special way of showing
affection towards the one person you love.'

I especially like this stanza^^ it should open peoples eyes to the fact that there's not just one way to love someone else. Personally I can't find anything really wrong with this poem accept one thing.

I've been told there's really no oneed for the periods and commas after the lines, It's believed to be an automatic pause in between them.

5/5

Good poem. the ending seemed like you just threw together some words.. it didnt seem together. if you know what i mean. i was expecting a different ending.but i still enjoyed reading it. 5/5

I already did "Two Lovers" -- so I decided to do this one instead :)

I didn't quite like this piece as much. I felt like you were saying everything too straight up and you weren't showing, just telling. Often, that's the difference between a mediocre or good poem, and a great poem. As I read it, I saw it as more of a rough draft. It has potential to grow into a better piece, but for now, it's a four.

I do like the idea of the piece though. Though you also fit in the heartbreak of love, you keep a sort of ... serene kind of essence to the piece that kept it from becoming depressing, and that's hard to do sometimes.
..__MiNDYY

Hmm... This wasn't the best poem I've read. I like the meaning behind it, that love is real, but the way it was expressed seemed sort of like a speach someone would give, and sadly, one that I would fall asleep to.

There is something that bugged me about this:

"Today - all around the world,
Everyone is trying to find love."

^^I saw this happened many times throughout the poem. This is one whole sentence, 2 lines, but ONE sentence, so the beginning of the second line should not be capitalized. You get what I'm saying? It's a continuation, not a new statement.

Overall, it was a good piece, but I've read better from you.
4/5
~Lace

U hav depicted sensible facts about love. Perhaps u cud work on the flow a lil bit. N plx correct those lil typos. Stil 4 the sound thoughts Ill giv a 5

Out of most of your poems i really liked this one...i love poems about love...and this one has a lot emotion and feeling to it...its real!!!
i had this same thing going inside of my head but i didn't know how to put it
and you just said it all for me really
keep up the good work
everything is going well it seems
5/5

I love this poem! it was beatiful! This poem would b great for someone who thinks or wants to give up on love. I know it would have helped me a lot if it had been around during my period on loneliness. Besides that, this was a wonderful poem.

I loved the stanza: It is the one thing in life, that most people are lucky to comprehend,
whether they find it instantly, or slowly.

5/5! MMMWAH