A Moment Frozen In Time

Wow u realli move me.. u realli got my attention fro the start til the finish...great job

CUUUUUUUUUUUTE, LOVEY & VERY ROMANTIC POEM...definitly one of my fav

oh oh!! i'm speechless...YOUR POEM made me speechless!!

This is really an amazing poem, i felt all the feelings I may feel in a poem :D

i totally felt the poem it was lovelyyyyyy

On this hot summer day
The trees swing and sway
I take a deep breath of air
Turn my head to see her stare

^^u should be very grateful to that hot summer day ;) nice entry btw, you made us wanna know wats next...

Eyes lock instantly
Familiar giggles come rapidly
Coy face hides secretly
Heart pounding loudly

^^hmmmmmmmmmmm :)...what can i say...hmmmmmmm:) that's love

She walks in my direction
Body trembling with affection
Time does stop and her beauty does shine
Something about this feeling is divine

^^the best part... i do believe that time DOES stop indeed in such moments... something!! EVERYTHING feels divine...okay so here she comes...still wanna know wats next...

Before long she is here indeed
And with a hug filled my every need
She took a long daze into my eyes
And together we let out long sighs

^^i'm speechless

We are finally together, we are finally here
Love flowing so true, pure and sincere
Soon the world seizes to exist
as we came together and for a long time kissed

^^FINALLY...& again hmmmmmmmmmm:)...

wish you happiness in this relationship for ever, PLEASE keep writing, that was WOW!!

Wow what a beautiful piece you penned here.
I love it to the depth of my heart, it felt sooo romantic and warm reading this poem.

She walks in my direction
Body trembling with affection
Time does stop and her beauty does shine
Something about this feeling is divine
This stanza seriously blew me away, I could imagine the portrayal here, with every move of her coming close to you and you trembling with affection, that was an awesome metaphor.
Last line was amazingly written !!

Very well done and sweet romance =]
Last lines were very great too, a long kiss, wow I'm feeling tempted already, hehe !

write on
I think I'm going to check oter poems by you =]
Best of luck xx

I don't find words. It's amazing, I love it. You can rhyme in a way I would only dream of, and the emotion is...
5/5

Ah...true love..so obvious for us, the readers!
Very sweet and tender love poem by you, Bassel:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid