Wow! i cant believe im the only one to comment on this poem! i loved this, it was so beautiful. it was a masterpiece in my opinion. yer a wondeful writer! keep those poems coming!! and i love the title also =]

A beautifull poem. your words create a wonderfull picture in my mind.
keep writing

Wow! Youre an amazing writer! that was... beautiful.

I love the use of the ocean also, but for a different reason. The vastness of the ocean is the only thing that seems resembles the heart for me. The waves like beats. Sometimes they come strong and excited and sometimes angry. Other times, they bring you peace. I loved it, I can so see myself sailing with this poem to read. Thanks for a great read. 5/5

Really good . Well done