Hey Heba I loved you poem and thought
that it was really powerful
and showed how sorry you are.
One thing that I noticed tho
is that you often jump
from past to present
"She was always there beside me when I am sad"
is an example that I picked up
so I think that if you checked on
that this would really be a great job!!
Aside from that
I loved it,
keep up the good work and take care

AWW!! I love this piece...its very sweet..and I'm a sucker for friendship poems! lol

She is the best friend I have ever had
She was always beside me whenever I am sad
She has never been to me so bad
With her I have never hidden my emotions
I have never lied to her
But, I always declare
feelings that my heart can't bare
She is my precious diamond
When she is with me, I am like a millionare

^^Aww this is such a sweet stanza!! AWW! lol I also am fond of the unique rhyme scheme! Beautiful darling!^^

But, she was the one I hurt
She was the one I broke her heart
And tore her apart
While I was enjoying this stupid art

^^I was a bit confused in this stanza...but thats your creativity..so great work!!^^

Friend, I am so sorry
I didn't mean to hurt you
When you told me that I killed you
Depression was the only thing I have been through
Please,forgive my sin
This can't be our friendship's fin
Try to forget and forsake
My awful and horrible mistake

^^I think this is your most steady stanza and prolly your best one! I think it reveals alot more emotions!!!^^

I really regret for what I did
I know I am a bad friend
People of her want to get rid
But,please give me a second chance
to get things right, and try to enhance
every mistake I did towards you

^^Once again...BEAUTIFUL STANZA!

I in the middle of weakness
And I am still waiting for you forgiveness
Because I can only say
I am so sorry...

I'm in love
in love with ur poetry

Excellent poem,
those feelings of regret toward your friend when you show that you are "sorry" whether it's your fault or not. saying you need your friend...those feelings are awesome

excellent my friend

You expressed yourself so well. this poem was amazingly beautiful. and i loved every word. the flow was great and i can tell it came from your heart.
job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

It was really nice and i now how you feel that was a really good way to show your feeling that would be what i would've done

Just writting this poem makes you a better friend than most others, forgiveness is what you deserve from whoever you wrote it to.

"But I always declare
feelings that my heart can't bare
She is my precious diamond
When she is with me, I am like a millionare"
meshaallah.....that is such a great way to express how you feel about your friend

Wooow amazing ! I've lost one of my best gfriend and even 2day i feel so sorry after 2years,even 2day i think of her and ask God 2forgive me i hurted her... Ohh God HEBA how ur poem does touched my heart,brought me back my memories :( 5/5

Wot a Poem WOW....... Have nothing To say Except Saying
YOU ARE MARVLOUS