How do you manage to come up with such indepth emotions ?..........Life does suck......when the going gets tough, do the tough runaway? But i totally know what you mean.......when things get too complicated for one to handle, in death there is, and will be comfort..........sadly all one can pray for is to let whatever to take its own course.Thumbs up!!!!!

This was outstanding.
Everything I'm gonna say in this comment
is totally euphemistic cos
I honestly don't think
if
I used all of the words in the dictionary
I would be able to come up
with a comment for this poem.
You've got me hooked :)
This was filled with emotions and
was such a poignant piece.
It was truly so powerful

Wow. really dark and deep.good job.5/5
**harlea

This was extremely dark, but definatly had an excellent flow to it. and rhyme as well. this poem is full of great word-choice. wow. i would have to look in the dictionary to look @ what some of them meant. lol. great work 5/5

It was a very nice piece as all your work is. It was a little harsh on my eyes, but if my eyes had witnessed what they had not seen then I believe the words delivered the emotions superbly. 5/5 without a question.

" feel their talons claw open my chest,
Exposing my life, so cruelly suppressed. "

^^this is so dark.... and so well written...

"Psychosis erodes my fragile rest,
Whilst demons vomit their evil finesse. "

^^wonderful word choice...
"evil finesse" -- interesting term

excellent write...
keep writing...

This was an excellent poem, I very much enjoyed the emotions that were portrayed through the piece.

Wow antrust me i dont say wow much but you ued all your words nicly mny people dont know how to do that 5/5

That was really good!
Clever how each line rhymed, and that you found all the words that really worked without it seeming like you were grasping for them.
Really dark but vivid! the imagery is fantastic
5/5