Comments : Astronaut

  • 11 years ago

    by Blueleo

    Simply breath taking.

  • 11 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Wow babe. This.. is uber powerful.
    wonderful use of imagery...its utterly breathtaking... and, im really speechless.
    Its amazing, as you are babe.
    She'll come back...

  • 11 years ago

    by Aish

    Absolutely brilliant!!!!!!!!!!
    very very very good!!!!!!!!! love the language and the imagery!!!
    a devastating ending, brilliant writing

  • 11 years ago

    by S R P

    This poem was absolutely amazing. I loved it, and honestly, there's nothing I would have improved. Thank you for sharing.

  • 11 years ago

    by Angel Eyes

    I dont even know what to say
    this poem is great

  • 11 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    "exhaustion laces through her sweet fingers"