Everything My All

I like this very much.. it has both feeling and statement.. a hard combination outside of a row.. write some more..

Well ur all was definatly woth reading in this piece, a very well written poem and an enjoyable read =D

I like this poem it reads well flows and rhymes well,but i think you're mistaken someone who is ungrateful for your all probably was not worthy in the first place.well done

Grant