My Love For You

by sweet escape   Jul 1, 2008


My love for you can not be broken.
My love for you is easy to see.
My love for you is as strong as can be.
My love for you is for you and you only.
So keep my love, it's not hard to do
You are the only person i can give my love to.

I wrote this poem in 5th grade and just found it again....never really thought of changing it so don't ask me to.

Dedicated to my darling.

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  • 15 years ago

    by XoXoBriannaoXoX

    Very nice..
    its very strong to show your love
    for that person.
    nice write,,
    keep it up!

  • 15 years ago

    by ChloeLauren

    Very simple but oh so Fab!

    Veryy good.

    Take Care x

  • 15 years ago

    by Lori

    I like this one...good flow..but I would love to see more variety. But thats your creativity and thats awesome bcuz you put your own heart into it. So i'll give you a 5 for it:)

  • 15 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    I liked this. It's short, simple, and to the point. Also, I like the innocence, but then again, you wrote it in the 5ft grade. Haha. Really though, it's cute. :] 5/5

    -Briana

  • 15 years ago

    by Ash

    Lol, 5th grade? So you were talented then and still are.
    None the less this is a simple and as they would say cute poem. Very nice!

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