To Whisper Love

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Jul 4, 2008


The setting of this poem:
Walking on the grass
Thats when I take your hand
May I have this dance?

The music starts to play
And you play along
The kind of thing you read about
Or hear in a love song

The sprinklers came on and I kissed you
We danced around dripping and wet
That kiss was probably better
Then any love song ever gets

To kiss her in the rain
But this rain comes from all around
You whisper love into my ear
No song has a better sound

To kiss her in the rain
To stare in eyes that blue
To sing the best song of them all
To whisper love to you

Anyone who says sunshine brings happiness has never danced in the rain ~anonymous

(it wasn't actually rain, it was sprinklers, but hey, I'm a poet, i do what i feel like.... probably why I suck at English)

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  • 15 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    Best...day....ever...

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    Awh this was a sweet poem. very touching. you got your message across well. i loved the emotion you expressed, very beautiful. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 15 years ago

    by Amber

    Dancing in the rain!!! Awwww....what a sweet poem!!! There is just something so special aboout the rain that brings so much love and happiness when love ones are in love. I love your poem VERY MUCH!!!. The emotions expressed in this poem were clearlly seen. I loved the poem a lot!!! Keep writing b/c I would love to read more of your poems. Great JOB!!! 5/5

    Amber~

  • 15 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    Aww.
    So sweet and pure.
    Dancing in the rain is fun.
    5/5 for sure.
    Keep it up :)

    xx

  • 15 years ago

    by DaytimeStar

    Thats really good i like every part
    XD
    keep writing more poems i would like to read them lol

    10/5

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