Wow loni, your poem is really amazing. I loved it.
5\5

Oh i can feel the rush all right =D

amazing there darling<3

Ok..if your going to pick a rhyming pattern stick with it...you started with aa..bb. but then you changed to abab..cdcd...it is confussing...pick one and stick with it.
4/5

Awww I love this poem wow ur a really good writer 5/5

It's your romantic words that I feed
I'm glued to the magic that's all around you
You shift my heart into hyperspeed
Too bad a war comes with what we got into

^^This was my favorite stanza (though the whole poem was amazing). I love how you express what it feels like when we fall for someone. This poem was beautiful. I loved everyword.

"Although I'm happily in your trance
I'm completely hypnotized
I guess you're worth the chance
I can't say no to the power in your eyes"

^Completely cute stanza, written very well.
Every line was so great and sweet, filled with so much feeling. Great job on this, I really loved it. Thanks for the comment! :)

Another great poem by a great author, keep up the good work!! 5/5

A poem is seriously so much more than a rhyme scheme.
as long as you are satisfied with the message portrayed in your poem then it doesn't matter what other people think or say.
This poem was very different. and clearly showed how you fely at the time of writing it. keep it up

The poem is very lyrical and passionate

A very good write, your skilled at conveying how u feel. i did however feel that the wording could have been improved slightly, and the change in rhyme scheme would hav been more effective with more structure. but definatly a good poem all the same.