O my god this is so good i feel the same way sometimes very good word choice i love it! 5/5 xxxxx<33

Awwwwwwww.....

This was a wonderful poem it made me think of a special someone that I totally completely utterly lost.

I feel this way often, I share ur pain...

Pm me if you'd like.

~jojo~

Well done really good work =)

The beating slowly stops now
all my happiness has gone
the room is getting darker
as my life reaches its dawn

The beating has finally stopped now
I am laying on my bed
the slits must have gotten deeper
and now i think im dead

^^^ those stanza's made me think about a lot of painful things. Your poem to me is amazing, written out of feeling lonely. I am sorry about that, but at times you will write poems, out of anger, saddness, happiness or loneliness. good poem though <333

This was really good.
5/5

That was amazing i loved it...5/5

I love this one, the begining isnt strong enough for me, but the end was perfect. i love the last two stanzas. excellent.

--TheGothicAlbino

WOWWWW INTENCE WRITE 5/5

Really deep but cool
gets me thinking to wat i could do