You captured a lot of truth in this poem I really liked it. Overall, it was a great read. I think it would go a lot further with some punctuation and apostrophes and some capitalizations but other then that it's great. I still don't get one line though, I think there must have been a typo. The line is:

knowing that you ill never sleep right

My goodness you have a wonderful way of writing. Love is just as you said, simple wonderful times with that special someone.
You wrote this will flow and emotion.

Awww that was so sweet and so very true. i loved that it sowed how you think what love means to you. 5/5

You know what? I bet you sat there and thought you could go on and on with this. Kinda like those old cutesy cartoons. But you didn't. And that, I think, makes this poem all the better. You've captured the simply personal things and you've crafted them into something that flows wonderfully and is a good length. Fantastic!

That is so true! 5/5

Im speechless this poem was amazing

Aww this poem was greatly written and it just speaks the truth about love, A great read, keep it up (:
5/5

BEAUTIFUL!!!

I loved that poem! Great job.

Aww... this poem is so true and beautiful! I think anybody who has been in love can relate to this piece... I know I can! You've expressed the way I feel inside! I really enjoyed it. Great job! :)

A beautiful, passionate poem! You express the feeling of love with genuiness!

Awwh this is a beautiful poem. I've felt love only once, and you've showed in words just how special it can be.

I particularly loved the ending:

"Your dreams, your life, your everything,
Each tear, each smile a new day may bring"

Amazing ending =] Great work 5/5

Beautiful passionate poem.
Love is all that and so much more on an undescribable level.
5/5

Wow great poem, you defined love brilliantly.

This is lovely and oozes love and sincerity. You say your words are simple, which I disagree with, but what cannot be argued about is the warmth and complexity of your content. This is wonderful,
All the very best,
Ben