Already There

by Sarah Dawn   Jul 8, 2008


You say you hate me
I say I love you
You say go die
I start to cry
You say f--k you
I think thats my que
You slam the door
I fall to the floor
You scream go to hell
I cry your too late
Can't you see
I'm already there

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  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "I think thats my que"
    `That's needs an apostrophe.
    `and, I think you meant cue instead of que.?

    There could be more to this poem because it is so short, but, I guess I see where you are going with this.. soo, nice job. But, I kind of wanted more? 4/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    The poem is too short but I cant describe how much I loved it...Few words included the pain u feel inside...This is awesome and this is the true talent..
    Keep up the good work..

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