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by Madison   Jul 8, 2008


A mist upon the far off shore
cast below this rage of emotion
a tear for all the days spent turning
looking for a strength to hold
tell a friend some sweet soft story
to engineer a fate unseen
lullabies sad as Satan looking on his long lost queen
foreign as the strangest stranger
walking through the desolate place
a summers dream once vibrant as life
now cold beneath the palest face.

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  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow, this is great. I think you have done an excellent job on this. Imagery and description are clear and so amazing. It has amazing usage of emotion. Oh my, I am amazed by the talent shown here

  • 12 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Wow, touching, i see it, i can actually see it. kudos to you, good work, another 5/5 indeed.

    -AJ

  • 14 years ago

    by ShatteredGirl

    Wow! really liked that.
    great writing :)

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