It's sweet. but i don't like it because it sounds like a goodbye..and i have personal issues with goodbye. so i'll stop rambling now and just give you a 5.5

Jesse.... i cried... i know that sounds weird, but i'm kinda sentimental right now and i can feel your pain...

i can't believe you gave her your notebooks... i can only imagine how precious those must be to you. at least mine are to me. but i can tell breanne is SPECIAL and she TOTALLY deserves you and vice versa, cuz she loves you so much...

i wish your soap opera (hehe... =] ) could have lasted longer, but don't forget what i said. make every moment last, so that you'll always remember how she made you feel. not that you'd forget... but you'll have a lot more to remember and her love will never leave you....

sheesh, i sound like a shrink... =)

keep telling her you love her, even if you sound like a broken record. she won't forget it. and when the guy you love tells you that... well, lets just say there's some magic that those three little words work inside a girl's heart... =)

make it last jesse, make it last. make up for what i couldn't do!!!

Good poem. Nice to read, very sweet.

That was so sweet.
your poems are always so sweet and never fail to put a smile on my face, even when theyre not exactly happy.
gr8 job. 5/5

I loved this poem so open and honest and i have a poem called bloody cupid and i think you might like that