Magnificently written, I love the structure and how you rhymed this, each stanza evoked emotion, well done :)

Chinwe,

Not bad at all! In fact I kinda love your voice here:)
Keep going, girlie!

Take care,

Ingrid

The best one ive read of yours so far.
Brilliant. very insightful and true.
5/5
Aish
xx

It's good, good flow. 4/5

Wow good one , focusing on the silence like that relaly creep me out from silence!!

great work

Wow good one , focusing on the silence like that relaly creep me out from silence!!

great work

This a good poem, I like it.

The silence holds many surprises for us, stuff in store for us, silence could be so different, yet so familar, but what I like about this piece is that you describe some stuff that the silence does. It's a deathly silence that provokes us, its good.

4/5

Your amazing.
dont be quiting
writing anytime
soon. promise?
[: <3 [: <3 [:

This is a very good poem, I can relate to it so well. It seems that sometimes the silence can be so strong it can almost have an echo of its own that only magnifies the emptiness of your surroundings. --- very good description of a unique concept --5/5...JIM

Wow,
AMAZING POEM
i loved it
you did a great job,
and great write
5/5

-halie

p.s thanks for the comment

That was very good I think you deserve a medal!

Amazing! Great flow and a really nice poem. 5/5.