Winsome Willow (haiku)

by John Long   Jul 13, 2008


Her new green dress hangs
sublime, floating shy and coy,
March wind, her first dance.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Corinne

    Beautiful!

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I love the image you have painted with words as well as that feeling of nature's
    beauty..very nice :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Jackie

    So few words can say so much, very descriptive and well written
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Wonderfully expansive and thought-provoking imagery for so few words....broadened even further by the title....Bravo..

  • 15 years ago

    by gracey grey

    Lovely Haiku............march wind, her first dance.... wonderful description .......