I loved the flow of the poem. It was a good love story of a girl not wanting to become like every other girl. But then again falling into it when she never wanted to. The glory of love. I love how it is written with what those girls who have fallen did and turned into being your story of how you were different from them and then you fell into being something you dont want to be. Overall good poem loves.

This is a really good poem. Describing all that you strive not to be, then the actual opposite you are, then finally the great twist that love's effect can bring to all. Being in love changes ones mind, it is both addictive and scary all at the same time!!

Wonderful poem with good flow and structure.

Michael

Great poetic device in this and excellent structure. Usually I don't like long poems but this was exceptionally good.
4/5

~Chinwe~

I remeber when i was like that but then a boy came along and made me fall for him hahah now we've been together 11 months :] Its really gud.

Aishh i love your poemmmm its amazing and its soo true
c/
xoxo
LoKa

Verry relatable and understandable piece. So many will know all about it. Its a great write. 5/5

OMG THIS POEM IS SO ME..!!!

I absolutly loved this poem cuz its exactly how i feel, i have added it to my favourites becuz i dnt think ile ever find anutha poem that suits my life so perfectly.!

Well down Aish.. & my god gurl. haha ur poems a just so amazing, u are officially 1 of my favourite authors & i only have 6 lol.

Keep up your great work.
*Hunny*