Lovely... I also think I wud write a Haiku with a lil help from all u guys..

Noorie... Karan N Miss Take..

Itz a wonderful Japanese verse...

Good work again..

Keep it up...

Best wishes...

Karan

Good on you Noor well done

Grant

First of all, let me say congratulations on your first haiku. That's something I haven't even attempted! I thought it was unique, because most haiku's are about nature and I don't like to read about nature. lol I won't suggest a new title for it, because I don't feel like that's my place, but I will point out that Karan has a pretty good title for it aready. :)

This was excellent considering it was your first. I do highly agree with the person above, knowing it was going to be a haiku I was thinking nature.. becuase most haiku's are about nature.. but you suprised me here. It was about life, and it was unique in its own way. I don't have any suggestions for titles, because I'm not good at coming up with them.. but I'm sure you'll com eup with a fantastic title. :] 5/5.

I loved this. I give you credit for doing a haiku, because I don't think I have the ability to put enough into something so short. It's really a talent for those who can. I, too, agree with Karan -- "Hostility" is perfect. This haiku is beautifully written. Great job. 5/5

``Briana

I think It is very cool to try something new and succeed in it...U got a unique talent..
I did love the poem so much ..
Keep up the good work and wish ya all the best...

Very nice Noor. Excellent job. 5/5

Nothing I can add, it's just beautiful and inspiring

I give it 4 need littile more work tho

This senryu stands out because in has depth
5/5

Check this out for your answer.
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/haiku/haiku.html.
I think you did good for a first go.

It is truely amazing when you think of it....the world within a grain of sand. We could all exsist on that grain, upon his palm, beneath his inspection. I wonder whether he would be pleased?? Now that is a topic for another poem/haiku, maybe?

Well done

Michael

I don't have the words..
except, you're right..