:) makes me smile every time i read it... if it wasnt for that damn gum obsession i would have gotten a 100 on this haha.... i love you more than anything

Oh yeah, i was smiling so hardcore i forgot... 5/5!!! :)

This is very beautiful, & Sarah must be one wonderful woman to have a great guy in her life. I read her comment on this and im glad she liked it alot, that makes me happy. I have a guy like this that means the world to me and im glad you two are happy. Have a great wonderful life together because im sure there are more wonderful moments to come.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

We're a coin, heads and tails, we'll always win.
`` I love this metaphor, because it's so original. I've never heard anyone compare themself and the person they love to a coin. It's jus really interesting.

Serendipity brought us love so real,
I wish this was something you all could feel.
`` This was a strong ending. It involves the reader, wanting them to feel this wonderful feel that you feel. You describe it in a way that everyone would do anything to feel it.

I can tell you love this person above anything else in the world, and your words clearly get that point across. It was original and held my interest unlike most love poems. I really enjoyed this.

Great job!

Keep writing!
Cayce

A really nice sonnet.
The choosing of words was amazing, and let me imagine the whole piece from begining to end. The structure is as you described, which let the flow stay throughout the whole poem.

Love it all 5/5

First of all, I think this is beautifully written.

"She holds my heart in the palm of her hands,
Careful not to drop it or squeeze too tight,
Her love like an ocean will meet all sands,
In the darkness she is my guiding light."

^^ This is a fantastic opening stanza. I quite like how the love you two share already shines through. "In the darkness she is my guiding light" <--- Possibly one of the most beautiful lines I've come across in any poem.

"When our eyes meet her love gives me a rose,
I'll forever walk in her garden of love,
Feelings I get from my head to my toes,
Nobody else in this world is placed above."

^^ Aw. This stanza is very sweet. It's absolutely mind-blowing. You two have definite talent.

"Life in her arms is perpetual bliss,
Holding me close I can taste her sweet skin,
With lips to die for, I'd die for her kiss,
We're a coin, heads and tails, we'll always win."

^^ Ah. Your word choice in this stanza is amazing.

"Serendipity brought us love so real,
I wish this was something you all could feel."

^^ The ending is absolute perfection. It's a great way to end the poem, and yet it still shows how much you two love each other.

Overall; I loved it, obviously. You two have written a beautiful piece together. 5/5

``Briana

& congratulations to you both. :]

Very sweet, one of the best collabs. i've seen yet. You've got great flow, great word choice and descriptions :]

You 2 are perfect! :]

5/5

"When our eyes meet her love gives me a rose,
I'll forever walk in her garden of love,
Feelings I get from my head to my toes,
Nobody else in this world is placed above."
Wow! ^
You could not have made that stanza more appealing to me. It intertwines the beauty of nature with the symbolism of love.
Your writing blows me away. You have such a passion, such a talent. It is beautiful. You make everything fit, I have nothing to edit. All I have to do is say I'm in awe.
Another perfect one!

Lexie

Wow, beautiful, made m cry, just the most amazing thing, You are so talented
xxx

Congrats!I'm glad that there is still love in this world.I was beginning to wonder personally.But this was a lovely poem.

"Life in her arms is perpetual bliss,
Holding me close I can taste her sweet skin,
With lips to die for, I'd die for her kiss,
We're a coin, heads and tails, we'll always win."

^This was my favorite stanza hands down. Simpily beautiful.I'd love to read more poems like this so keep it up.5/5

-amber-

Nicely done. It's well worth reading without being absolutely mind-blowing, so I gave it a four. Very tender, very pleasant to read. I hope you have a happy wedding!

You two are sooo cute :) Poems like this make me smile on the inside. Love is a wonderful thing and it's even better when you can share it with someone else. You two are soo good at expressing your feelings in new creative ways and that's why I loved this piece. Very heartwarming :) Good job as always. Nik

Wow! This is true love right here & the fact that it was a collab with a loved one makes it even more beautiful.