Omgg. wow! this was amazingly written. i really loved this one. best one ive read so far. it was so sad yet it held so much meaning in every line. a great piece! 5/5.

-ashlei.

*tear* that is so sad i gave you a 5

*tear* that is so sad i gave you a 5

I can understand how you felt , it is a very ugly feeling to feel not enough for somone , never can handle it myself , specialy when my girl died ,
i hope you dont go to see him soon ,
life is short you will see him soon enough
this poem touch me a lot ,
jsut in structure make it more then 2 paragraph and add some ryhming to it it would be perfect

Its actually pretty goodd

This is very touching... I prefer happy endings though... :)
good write... the emotions are all there..

"And went to see you again "
^^ very heartfelt...

keep writing..

Thats soo gud i really enjoyed that keep it up

Told you i'd be back

great first stanza it worked really well
the last line to soon for me!

good work well done!