My Dream you and me (rap)

Today marks a new day. New chance.
To prohibit myself into this dance.
They were right. Give it some time,
And you'd get your raps from rhymes.
Since I have stayed patient, I got
One more. Dj thats me. Soon its my shot.
Redemption in the love game,
Was built up above my prior shame.
Cause I'm done being a lyier. It's not fame.
If it was one thing I would bring,
It would be her so I could be her king.
Luck has nothing to do with it. It's just that,
I was suppost to me you. And when com'ono straat
Hit the table the air was outta my lungs.
So when I was, you were there and sung.
Have you found out yet? That your pain,
All of it that you had to substain,
Is like what I would do if this was Titanic.
I'm Jake your Rose, and no need to panic.
Die out in the water while your on driftwood.
Try to live but die for you sayin its all good.
I've waited for my chance and soon it will be.
Well, hopefully. At first I thought I would expire,
But you came in to rehire
Me and wish to me the best of my luck.
Remember that time I was depressed so I said I suck?
Ias wrong. The entire time, just a lie.
Honestly I was saying I want another try.
But thats up to you. Nobody is forcing you.
I'm just sittin here remourcing you.
The Dynamic Duo is what we used to be.
Now its My Dream you and me.

*A little 2 minute freestyle off the top of my head. To Cheyenne. I'm waiting*