Amazing poem! I like your style - it aids you well in expressing you feelings. You have great talent and I hope that you will continue to showcase your words through poetry!
5/5 from me!

Thanku... :) This means a lot to a beginner like me... :)

Good poem !

The tone wasent hard to follow. a great write. you must have takin some time into writing this the emotion is very deep.

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10/10 but as we sleep alone without a warm shoulders to lay our heads we woke more lonely even without that sparse of hope that was yesterday to aid us to go on

I really enjoyed yet another piece of yours! This had so much emotion behind it, and was honestly great. I could feel the emotion from you in each word you wrote. I loved it. Keep writing!

I loved how it flow..Written perfectly although it was filled of sadness..I could feel your emotion in every words written in it..As a beginner, you did a very fantastic job here..Good Job..xDD

Ok so i just happened to read a random comment from above from you saying that you're a beginner?!! it's amazing to read poems like this and finding out you're just a beginner. you truly do have a gift for this. this poem was deep, sad, emotional, but like your other poems, very relatable. amazing write. i hope to read more from you real soon.

Interesting format again. The emotions in this poem were clear and real yet again. This poem is so relateable, yet again. I know alot of us can feel this way sometimes. I love the repition of "The tears flow" that was pretty effective. Great write. Well done. Keep it up. Great poems thus far. 5/5. (:

Another fine story line that lacks the metre/rhythm of a great poem. I know this is the same critique as I wrote earlier but it is my opinion that all poetry need rhythm in its lines and I tend to dote on the topic. The "what" and emotions of the words don't do anything to me if the flow isn't there, they become another "term theme" I am helping with.

This is an amazing poem...so full of emotions...
>Am I really crying?
Is this really me?
How did it all go wrong?
I am tired,
Searching for answers in this endless night
Truly lost,
I indeed am<
My favorite part...I can relate...

I think we all feel alone at times, even in a crowded room with a bunch of friends we often feel as if we have nobody. Nobody who you are or where your from, alone always feels the same. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

The repetition really strengthens the emotion in this piece the was some good imagery i could actually see in my minds eye the person in this poem sitting crying the words chosen are perfect.

You r never alone and things will be alirght one day. 5/5

This was a great poem, portraying strong emotions and a relative flow. The free verse here is very well-written and your use of the phrase "The Tears Flow" was strong if not bordering over-usage.

I liked how you didn't put in your title "The Tears Flow" because then the phrase would have been so worn out at the end, it would have been just plain annoying. But the title you chose instead "Tears" was rather cliche, if not a good choice but more creativity would have made it stand out more.

"I have sunk deep into an ocean of nothingness
A sea,
Deeply filled with the sorrows
That linger in every moment of my wretched life
The tears flow"

^This was likely my favourite stanza, especially the first two lines. You describing something, then adding in a metaphor to completely allow the reader to wrap around the concept. Though how you just seemed to wedge in the last line was confusing. It didn't seem to make much of a connection with the rest of the verse.

"Am I alone?
The tears flow"

^This stanza was both interesting and disappointing. I liked how you decided to just have the one line, and your repeated phrase. I read over it a few times and found that there was a connection. But a cliche and sort of small thought when the usage of just one line and the repeated phrase could have been made so much stronger by rewording it or putting in a different line altogether.

Overall this was a good poem. (;