Wonderful poem. It's so sad.
But so well-written.
You have a lot of talent!! =]
(please, comment my new poem. i want everyone's opinion on it)
Thank you!!
Also, keep on writing.

--Justina

Some times it's never a good thing to tell some one they are a waste... I know that for a fact because I am told I am a waste alot. It truly truly hurts and can kill a person inside to know that some one thinks of them like that. And we never think some one is going to leave until they do . It becomes such a shock to us and then we realize they are not coming back. People never know a good thing until they lose it.

This is such an amazing poem, great job!!
5/5

I think this is a really good poem.
I like how you used end rhyme in i think most or all of your lines. It also made me feel what you felt. Its good. =]

Really awesome.Your emotions were really true.I have just felt that while I was reading it.
excellent5\5.

Wow I really love your poem, and I can see exactly where are you coming from. I have felt that way and you put it into words I LOVE IT

I loved this poem and how you took something such as a "curfew" and changed its meaning into something much more powerful and huge. Beautiful. I love how you spoke about the pain, yet you understood where it came from and the way you accepted the answers. Simply amazing.
<3Raych

I didn't know love had a curfew
`` I love this line, because it's so unique. I've never heard it before at all. ^-^

Now is the time to answer love's curfew
`` Oooh. I love the repetition of it! Especially in the last line, because it lingers in the reader's head after they've finished reading the poem.

Well glancing through this, I notice how many "I"'s you have. Usually once you've established who you're talking about, it's not necessary to keep repeating it. :]

I thought it was good. :]

Keep writing!

.||CAYCEE||.

A very interesting poem, you have a way of portraying things differently than most people would useualy do such as by mentioning love's 'curfew'
Amazing job, your a very good writter!
=]

This was a really beautiful poem,
i loved reading every word.
the pain of a broken relationship was shown so clearly through it.
The power of love is so strong that sometimes we as humans cant actually control its outcome but we can try and do our best to make it
a good one.
I loved this poem, it was a wonderful write,
great job!!! keep it up

"Sometimes the answer to love is a break
Leaving is the answer for what we brew
I will try not to miss you for only your sake
Now is the time to answer love's curfew "
That is a powerful strong end.
The rest of this i enjoyed. It was sad, but like there was some hope after all.
Wonderful!

Lexie

It is very sad when it is too late, but this poem is a beautiful way to face it

First off, the title is nice. :)

In this piece I thought your word choice was better. Your rhyming was nice again, but what I found to be lacking was your flow. But adding or taking out a couple of small words you will find your poem to such much better.

If you're not sure if your flow is okay or not, try reading it out loud. You'll hear the flow better than if you just read it in your mind.

My honest critique: 4/5

Beautiful write hun. 5/5
Love the emotion.