Wonderful rhyme. Great poem. But, if you are talking about your friends, shouldn't this be in the friendship category? well done nonetheless.. :) great flow, keep writing.. nice start 5/5

Thanks I really appreciate it.

haha I am talking about my friends...sort of. Take it for what you want. I was primarily talking about books saving the character in the poem from social depression.

Greattttt poem Mr. Austin! very well written!

Very easy poem to follow and understand. I find it interesting that you've made it untitled. Sometimes a title doesn't matter in a poem. Like this one, there is usually enough detail in a poem to figure out what it's about. I liked the meaning behind this poem and the type of style you've given it. Great work.

Srsly good work!! 8)

5/5

This one also flowed quite nicely

This line, "In my mind they played,
Which gave them their worth." is my fav. and the last stanza.
very good. i liked it a lot. 5/5

Hmm. I was somewhat confused on this one.

At first I was thinking imaginary friends, then you mentioned wood, so I imagined invisible furniture. Not sure how that worked out in my head.

The writing was really good. I like the made by machine but man gave them birth. That's a way awesome line in my opinion. I'm not exactly sure why, but it fascinates me.

Great job! keep it up!

-mo-

Okay love the poem.
again the rhyme was very good there are a few lines that fade a little on the rhyming..
but still your poem was beautiful...
i know that people might think that the poem is for a friend, but the words that you used where also discribing something deeper..like society and man...if i'm wrong please correct me..

**Ada**
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