Very touching and emphasising rhyme and emotion.
Well Done
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Very good work, it has a meaning to it. I like it :)

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Really good Chinwe. I think it's spelt sewn, not sown... in the last stanza.

Besides that i think its very good.

xoxo

Hang in there baby girl, and you are so right gods timing is the best and he will cary you through. I can already see he has blessed you beyond your years.
And yes family is the most important in life , I for one have built and been added to an extended family on poems and quotes that I am thankful for and so proud of.
another good poem , God bless you and keep you ---JIM...5/5

That was wow....im like crying horribly now...great job on that...and on this story book of a poem...like every stanza was a chapter or a page...i was just so intense with it....i dont know how i can describe how i feel right now....there are so many words that i could say for this....heart breaking...but then it puts a touch on the heart of the meaning...tear breaking.....a wonderful but unusual melody...just nice job...<3 ^-^

CourtneyxHolland

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