Colby

by Kait   Jul 21, 2008


A slap to the face.
A bruise on my back.
No gentle embrace.
Just love we lack.

Countless tears.
The deep want to leave.
But, can not through the fears.
An apology is what I need yet will not receive.

So hit me first.
Scream at me twice.
Your words forever cursed.
I should not pay this price.

Grab the courage to walk away,
From your abusive hands.
No longer can I stay.
Or submit to your commands.

You called me your girlfriend.
So, why hit me?
No matter, this is the end.
I am now set free.

Say goodbye.
I'm gone for good.
To everyone you will lie,
just like I knew you would.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Nawa

    Wow !! very emotional. I think you have done a great job portraying your emotions on this relationship. Great job, keep it up.

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "The want to leave"
    `Did you mean that instead of the?

    "An apology is what i need yet will not receive."
    `Capitolize your i's. I find it neater that way. :]

    "You called me your girlfriend.
    So, why hit me?
    No matter, this is the end.
    I am now set free."
    `I really hope your boyfriend didn't really physicall hit you. That's terrible if he did. :[

    Overall, a sad piece but well expressed anger. :] 5/5. Keep it up, Kait. <3

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