This poem is very good in fact it is amazing i loved it is on my fav list.
you are such an amazing poet
keep it up

This poem is obviously awakening of our souls. I think you are thoughtful and smart lady who has heart on the right place. Every time we open telly only thing we feel is sickness... We feel ill... This world is covering by the blood of innocent people...Peace upon their souls...

Yes, these things what are happening now...are just reminder we are at the begin of end....

Poem had excellent ideas, meaningful thoughts. Well done.

This poem is obviously awakening of our souls. I think you are thoughtful and smart lady who has heart on the right place. Every time we open telly only thing we feel is sickness... We feel ill... This world is covering by the blood of innocent people...Peace upon their souls...

Yes, these things what are happening now...are just reminder we are at the begin of end....

Poem had excellent ideas, meaningful thoughts. Well done.

Wow,what a wonderful poem,I really thank you goth for having the courage to write about this issue.Because all the people-not only you-are sick and tired of seeing and watching those violent murders and torments everyday.And this shows how the humanbeing is so fatal and agressive.
great job5\5.

Oh darling this poem was wonderful yet again you write another inspiring poem i love it keep on writing cant wait till you write another one! 5/5!

I am absolutely speechless!!!
WOW that was truly amazing
and a poem that everyone
could relate to and understand
except most people act negligent
towards the truth
however you did an outstanding job
yet again. 5/5
Take Care

I love this poem! its amazing n the imagry is beautiful! you're an amazing poet! 5.5

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I really love this poem, it has such a meaning that I think others, including me, understand. Great descriptions and this poem is so powerful and filled with emotion. You really captured the horror and descruction of all thats going on. Nice work, thank you for your comment, its greatly appreciated. Keep writing, always and forever.

Very well wrote visuals where very good throughout yet I feel like the rhymes where forced on some parts like monsters and gamesters its follows some rules of rhyming yet it sounds off like that maybe another word like ponders would have fit better still a good write though

Wow I have nothing to say it really was an awsome poe mlove it (^_^) keep up the wonderful like you are doing right now (^_^)