Comments : Shadow of past sorrows

  • 13 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    No i've been there. I know.We live in the same world full of sorrow and dispare. But Once we've climbed the mountain of fate, on the otherside is paradise. We first got to climb through all the rough edges, and cliffs. As we do this we form our body and our mind to be ready.

  • 13 years ago

    by Liz

    Is this pain and sorrow that's now my home

    do u mean in?

    hey i gave it a 5 it is GREAT

  • 12 years ago

    by NoUr

    I think we all had our ups & downs..i'm glad u r stronger now..nice poem..well-written..keep it up!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow this poem was amazing. you said what was on your heart, and that's a great thing. you expresse yourself wonderfully.

    These things so bad are in my past
    The scars I have will always last
    And the years go by like a shadow cast
    My strength and pride have still held fast

    that stanza was my favorite of all of them. i feel i could relate to it the most, it was like you said just how i felt. you can really make your words come to life, and you write so your reader's can relate, therfore making it easier to understand your work. excellent job. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.