So sweet! i love the motif of promise going through the whole poem. very trusty, touching and tender words.
I want to grow old with you
I think you have that clue <-- these are probably my fav lines.
with very simple still meaningful words you express so much love and care.
5/5

This is a good poem but it could b longer, like give more reasons behind the whole title.... but its still a good read

Nice job, although the ending sort of lost it's flow. but overall the poem was great, nice word choice.

5/5

"We can make it through and through"
`Delete and through.. it's not necessary.

"I will never leave you baby
You take my breath away
I think about you
Each and everyday"
`This is sweet, but almost too clique for me. Everyone says these lines.

"Baby this love is going to last
Whatever they say, we will make it
Through everything good and bad"

"I will never give up on our love
We can make it through and through
Without you, I would not be able to live"

`I loved your optimism. :] <3

Overall, a wonderful poem. You have a very positive attitude and seem to have found someone you truly love with all your heart. Excellent write. 5/5.

Hmm. . . . .
The expressions are very sweet n strong at the same time... And portray ur true feelings... Good job! :)

This poem is good but it is also too simple.
For example the lines
'I think about you
Each and everyday'

That was really simple and I agree with the comment earlier that someone made saying it was cliche. Just try expanding your vocabulary a bit, maybe you a thesaurus to help you get deeper words and lines.

4/5 Overall the poem was sweet and if it is nonfiction I hope you and your loved one all the best :)

-Shannon <3

It was very sweetly written...I do believe writing a love poem is not as easy as writing a sad one atleast from my experience but you did fantastically here..It was simple that made an easy read...But i do admire the love and affection that this poem was tryin to convey..A very cute and lovely dedication of a genuine feelingto someone you love..Good Job..

Good,
i Can Totally Relate..
Keep Up The Good Work..

Cute ^^
love the positive attitude