Very scary though- I like it. The angel of Death- a very inspirational title! You definitely have my vote.

Very good, i love it.

This is another poem where I find the message outshines the poem , and to me that is the best it can get.
I truly loved the context from which it was written . This is the second of yours I have read but again I find so much wisdom from such young eyes --please keep your insitful messages flowing ...JIM 5/5

Indeed.. very good.. you write a very meaningful poem.. it is true many indeed are scared of death.. nd indoin so they do not live.. I have learnred tht one.. Very good poem.. flows nicely and holds your attention.. keep it up!!.. 5/5..

That was amazing my dear!!!! I mean it had a perfect rythm and rhmye (i cant spell so i hope you get what im trying to say x3<3) but this is like WOW o.o now im not MORE afraid of death haha. But keep writing sweetheart you will go big :) But you know i loved every bit of it!!!

CourtneyxHolland
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Thank you so much for your comment too but you know my poems wont ever live up to yours mya :D

Awsome this poem made me happy =]

Lol I was enjoying the poem and then my name appeared at the bottom, made my eyes widen for a bit there!
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Great work