:[ This is truly sad. You expressed your emotions very clearly however.. which was very good. Umm, the rhyme again... flawless. It's amazing how much you've improved and how this rhyming thing is like your favorite thing to do now with your poems. It works out so well. Each poem of yours has a smooth flow which makes the poem such an easy read. Great work. 5/5.

This poem is very emotional and has a good rhyme scheme. I liked it! Good write.

Though sad, this poem had a beauty that could not be denied. The emotion portrayed within the words was amazing to behold. I am sincerely sorry that a friend could make you feel this way; I think it is, perhaps one of the hardest feelings to endure. 5/5

Oh I love it soo much !!!!!
I haven't read a wonderful poem in a long time..Girl you totally rocked
I dunno what to say exactly but I like every line and every stanza of this poem
Last stanza was heartbreaking, last line almost moved me to tears

Very great piece
Keep writing !!

Wowowowowwo nice poem~~~ 5/5

Another one of your amazing poems. I dont know how you manage to write like that.
Especially the 2nd and 3rd "verses"
Those were amazing.

Dude love your talent of writing wonderful poems.

Keep it up and keep all the wonderful poems that you write (^_^) 5/5

AGAIN..love hurts..obviously ur feelings r totaly true and strong..i felt the poem is a scream to ur friend..keep writing it really helps getting out wats inside u..

It is a good poem.
i like this part especially:

"I dream and I wish and think of what could be,
just to amount to if I should stay or flee."

I could feel your confusion there. it's really good.
but the flow needs a little work, it's something I'm working on too. but over all its a good poem
thanx.

Good job and very emotional